Tuesday, 14 October 2014


Punctuate this correctly.
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It was a monday morning, I just got woken up by my mum to get ready for school. I got out of bed and reached down for my uniform but it wasn't there. I looked under my bed, under my pillows but I couldn't find my uniform anywhere. 
"Kaidin have you gotten in the shower yet?" 
"No mum I can't find my uniform."
"Well you better find it quick or you will be going to school in your onesie!" 
"But mum, I cant find it anywhere. It’s like it's just disappeared."
"Oh sure just like all your other stuff huh Kaidin." I got a note to go to school with, to say that my uniform is lost, and that I have to wear mufti just for today. Which was a pain because every teacher I walked past, asked why i'm in mufti and where my uniform is. So I just showed them the note and moved on. When I got home I went to go grab my iPod, from where I always put it, I looked and that wasn't there either. I yelled out to my mum, 
"Mum have you seen my IPod?"
"No but do you know where did you last put it?"
"Mum, if I knew where I last put it do you think i'd be asking you where it is!" 
"Sorry just trying to help."

I thought to myself that I'll try to find it later. So I run into my room to go on my PS3 but surprise surprise it’s not there. 
"Oh what now Kaidin?" 
"I know you're up to mischief tell me where all my stuff is!"
"Kaidin, do you really think I would hide your uniform away from you so, you would go to school in your onesise? Now what’s gone missing?" 

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