Describe using your senses: What can you see, hear, smell and feel (you will have to imagine the small and feel). I would expect to see technical words and verbs, similes, imagery, onomatopoeia, alliteration, metaphor.
I can smell the stench of the metal as it makes my head hurt. I feel the coolness of the metal on my silky smooth hands. All I can hear is the bang of the machines like a drum in my ears. I also hear the eeeeeee sound of the heavy metal machines. I have to be delicate as if I make the wrong move I will mess up the whole watch.
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